Style of language
The language used in William Golding’s Lord of the Flies is generally quite formal. The narration features a lot of dialogue, which helps to develop the readers’ sense of the individual characters. When the boys speak, they use the language of typical 1950s schoolboys:
Ralph turned with shining eyes to the others.
‘Smashing.’ (pp. 23-24)
The boys use idioms and slang, suggesting their shared social class and their similar experiences. The exception is Piggy, who sometimes uses non-standard grammar when he speaks: “ ‘I’m sorry I been such a time. Them fruit -’ ” (p. 5). Piggy’s language suggests that he might come from a different social class from the other boys and marks him as an outsider.
Metaphors and personification
In terms of the choice of words, Golding repeatedly uses imagery drawn from the natural world to descri...